Reflection to “Show Me the Way to Go Home”
This article is about the
statistic of young adults who leave their home. I did not know these statistics
before I read this article. I find this article very informative due to the
fact that I learned some interesting information from it. For example, I did
not know that the number of leaving home is not so high even in the US.
There are many factors that
affect these statistics and rates. The writer says some reasons for this rate
and he gives some examples. Of course, leaving alone or with your friends has
some advantages. You are free and you can make whatever you like, but I think
that living with your parents has more advantages than living alone or without
your parents. As the writer says, I believe that living at home with your
family give you security and moral support. Your parents give you both
financially and morally support. You can hardly trust any other people except for
your family. For example, you can share your secrets with your parents and
sister without doubt. They will understand you and they will find a solution
for your troubles. I think our home is the most comfortable place in the world
because we do not need to wash our clothes, make meal and clean. The writer
says that many people who are at their 30s come back their houses. He or she
gives some examples of it. I believe that those people come back their home
because of the fact that the safest and the most comfortable place is their
home.
Lastly, I believe that our
home is safer and more comfortable house than any other house in most aspects. It
is more advantages to live with your parents. I totally agree with the writer
and I like this article and the examples in it very much.
Dear Helin,
YanıtlaSilI really liked your reflection about leaving home. You made me read the article you wrote a reflection. You made your points clearly. Like you, I think that living with your family is good for everyone since you have every kind of support from them. Whatever you do, they are ready to take you in. You shared with us some of your ideas and the reasons behind them. I really liked them. While I was reading your reflection, I realized that we are thinking in the same way about the topic. However, there are some grammar mistakes. You want to check it out once more. "financially and morally support" is wrong,and I think you meant "financial and moral support" and also there are some subject-verb agreement mistakes. I also found your article a little bit short. Despite of these few details, it was the reflection written sincerely, and worth reading among our class blogs. While reading it, I feel that I am talking with you. To sum up, I found your article very good and sincere. It reflects absolutely your personality and perspective towards your family life. I agree with your all points. I think you did a brilliant job. Thanks for your sharing it. I look forward to reading your other journals and articles. :)